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"Shorty!"

"Who are you calling too short to see with a magnifying glass?!"

"Brother, please. She didn't say that, did you ________?"

"Of course I did, this shorty need to learn to stay out of my buisness!"

"What?! Stay out of your buisness? You were trying to learn alchemy, and I wanted to help."

"Well don't, I don't need some migit to help me with something I can do myself!"

"DON"T CALL ME SHORT!"

"I can do whatever I want."

"You can't learn alchemy by yourself."

"Why not? You did."

"That's different!"

"How?"

"It just is!"

"Fine shorty! Just leave me alone!" You begin to stomp away angrily while Ed and Al look too shocked to say anything.

---Later that Night---

You sneak out of you room to go appologize to Ed when you hear Al say something. 'Why is Al in Ed's room,' you thought while listening in on their conversation.

"Brother, why did you have to be so mean to ________?"

"Because I don't want her learning alchemy."

"Why?"

"I know she wants to come with me but I don't want her turning into another military 'dog'. I care about her too much."

You gasp loudly and they both turn towards the door.

"Brother, what was that?"

"I'll go check."

You stand rooted to the spot as Ed opens the door.

"_______? What are you doing here?" Ed starts to blush when he remembers what he just said.

"Do you really care about me?"

"I... um I..."

You grab Ed and begin to drag him towards your room. When you arrive you sit on your bed and pat the spot next to you, trying to get him to sit down. He sits down and starts blushing even more.

"Do you really care about me?"

"Um... I..." Suddenly he leans over and kisses you. When he breaks the kiss he mumbles, "Yes."

You smile, "I love you too Ed."

---The Next Morning---

Ed gets up and starts to wander down the hall to the kitchen half asleep and sees Al reading a book about alchemy. He looks up only to see Ed naked.

"Brother, why are you naked?"

Ed looks down at himself them suddenly screams, "I didn't do anything, I swear!"
I decided it was about time to put this up of deviantart. It's been in my notebook for a while now. It was originally a really strong lemon and my friend wrote the lemon part, but I decided I liked this version beter.

Trying to decide if I should continue this or not.

I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist, Ed, or Al.
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:iconitalylover6:
Italylover6 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 13, 2015  New member Hobbyist Writer
Al why'd you have to look at him. And Ed put some clothes on and LET ME LEARN ALCHEMY! Btws you should totally continue this.:D
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student General Artist
O.O What has Ed done to me?!
But I really liked this!
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hyebi606 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
im scared..... i dont wanna be in a teen pregnancy tv showhappy cry XD  
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Sugar-Crazed-Fangirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Student Writer
Dat ending... LOVE IT XD Swag-trap the pimp-daddy 
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FlutterDash134 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  New member Student Writer
DAT ENDING THOUGHBonnie Bruh Chat Icon 
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:iconhomestucklov35:
homestucklov35 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WTF !!!
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Shy-Little-Wolf-Pup Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
BOOM PREGNANT!
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:iconcitrusotakutea:
CitrusOtakuTea Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lolz that ending
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Nikkirubinstein Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Student Writer

Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Artist
the ending.........what did he to to us?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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:iconvamp104:
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol dat ending!
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:iconlozfangirl1:
LoZFangirl1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Bahaha! Love the ending
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ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol dat ending thou
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ALEXANDRA-DARK Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
MOWR PLZZZZ!!!!!! LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!!!!!
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ALEXANDRA-DARK Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
btw awesome
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol al should have been more like:

"B-B-BROTHER!? IS THERE ANY PARTICULAR REASON WHY YOU ARE NOT WEARING ANY CLOTHING...?!"

Lolol well anyway, u did really good at the story! I laughed at the part when Ed came doenstairs naked:)))) classic:)
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Envylover565 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Awwww I want to read the Lemon
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ThorxMexThor Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
IYLKFVBULM<I?!?! MOUR!
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Nepeta132 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ed looks down at himself them suddenly screams, "I didn't do anything, I swear!" I walk downstairs only in Ed's T-shirt and falls on Ed. "Umm.... hehe... Umm... Yeah", Ed shuttered.

((Real convincing Ed real convincing))
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DuckyCupcakes Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me: walks out In only Ed's t-shirt

Ed: blushes

Al: :iconpervyalphonseplz:
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AngeltheforgottenRO Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I read thes cake and now I think im part cat because I swere I just died lmaoBenio Nose Bleed Icon Benio Nose Bleed Icon Benio Nose Bleed Icon my first bleed omg need to remember to read with some napkins next to me lol thank god it was for ED
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unitato4321 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol lol lol lol lol
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GTWinner621 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Writer
Alsphone's line... Reminded me of Lichtenstein... :iconpervyamericaplz:
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praiselordzalgo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So true! I'm imagining her just looking at Switzy and saying.That!
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GTWinner621 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student Writer
To whom though?
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iloveallhetaliastuff Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
france obviously lol 
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:icongtwinner621:
GTWinner621 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Student Writer
please, no
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emmalynncat Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
bWAHAHAHAHAAH!!!!
SO NOT SORRY, ED~
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XxSweetScarlettxX Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
phhhht HAHAH
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AprilsAngel2000 Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Writer
Dat ending thow LOL! love it!
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Hey100 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014  Student Writer
Lol
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Edwardcrusher Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I do wonder myself what happened that night in the story?nose bleed Please don't out it be pervy though my nose will bleed if the intenchen was pervy
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angelstien10 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
So many comments are like pervy and asking for lemons so I shall no follow the crowd...
I love dit so much in my mind he somehow just stripped in his sleep and Al was confused.....IDK but seriously I igured he really wouldn't do anything. 
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:iconthelittlea:
thelittlea Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for going against the norm. I'm glad you liked my writing. :)
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:iconangelstien10:
angelstien10 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I don't like it
I  LOVE IT! 
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:iconthelittlea:
thelittlea Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:D
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CanadaHeta Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
"I didn't do anything, I swear!"
Me: oh suuurrreee you did :iconedplz:
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:iconthelittlea:
thelittlea Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol.
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sabrinayamazaki Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT ACTUALLY HAPPENED THAT NIGHT;
bagels.
(Ed; bagels, what the...? me: shhhhhhhh you hear that? ed: uhh no. me; it is the sound of all the effs i don give (to other people that is  *eyebrow dance*) ed:....)
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Best comment ever XDClap Epic clap 
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ALEXANDRA-DARK Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
totally the best 
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sabrinayamazaki Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*bows* why thank you!
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:iconthelittlea:
thelittlea Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll leave what happened to your imagination. ;)
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Megafangirl77 Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nosebleed 
Pervy thoughts...
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:iconthelittlea:
thelittlea Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
All of the pervy thoughts. :D
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EvilJellyBean13 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2014  Student General Artist
"I didn't do anything I swear" XD
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:iconthelittlea:
thelittlea Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm glad you liked it.
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CannibalisticChaos Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2014

'Not sure if Lemon,

or just took a shower...'

squintplz 

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emmalynncat Featured By Owner May 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Hmmmm....
Lemon.
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CannibalisticChaos Featured By Owner May 31, 2014
It smells like a lemon.
So, it probably was.
I hope there was booty.
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