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"Shorty!"

"Who are you calling too short to see with a magnifying glass?!"

"Brother, please. She didn't say that, did you ________?"

"Of course I did, this shorty need to learn to stay out of my buisness!"

"What?! Stay out of your buisness? You were trying to learn alchemy, and I wanted to help."

"Well don't, I don't need some migit to help me with something I can do myself!"

"DON"T CALL ME SHORT!"

"I can do whatever I want."

"You can't learn alchemy by yourself."

"Why not? You did."

"That's different!"

"How?"

"It just is!"

"Fine shorty! Just leave me alone!" You begin to stomp away angrily while Ed and Al look too shocked to say anything.

---Later that Night---

You sneak out of you room to go appologize to Ed when you hear Al say something. 'Why is Al in Ed's room,' you thought while listening in on their conversation.

"Brother, why did you have to be so mean to ________?"

"Because I don't want her learning alchemy."

"Why?"

"I know she wants to come with me but I don't want her turning into another military 'dog'. I care about her too much."

You gasp loudly and they both turn towards the door.

"Brother, what was that?"

"I'll go check."

You stand rooted to the spot as Ed opens the door.

"_______? What are you doing here?" Ed starts to blush when he remembers what he just said.

"Do you really care about me?"

"I... um I..."

You grab Ed and begin to drag him towards your room. When you arrive you sit on your bed and pat the spot next to you, trying to get him to sit down. He sits down and starts blushing even more.

"Do you really care about me?"

"Um... I..." Suddenly he leans over and kisses you. When he breaks the kiss he mumbles, "Yes."

You smile, "I love you too Ed."

---The Next Morning---

Ed gets up and starts to wander down the hall to the kitchen half asleep and sees Al reading a book about alchemy. He looks up only to see Ed naked.

"Brother, why are you naked?"

Ed looks down at himself them suddenly screams, "I didn't do anything, I swear!"
I decided it was about time to put this up of deviantart. It's been in my notebook for a while now. It was originally a really strong lemon and my friend wrote the lemon part, but I decided I liked this version beter.

Trying to decide if I should continue this or not.

I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist, Ed, or Al.
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:iconyoshishitjustgotreal:
YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL Featured By Owner Edited May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Ed be like "I'm bringin' sexy back~." And I'm just here, like,
Edward Elric - Icon "IMMA LICK THAT FACE OFF YOU-- DAMN IT!!!"
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ham2629 Featured By Owner May 2, 2016  Student Artist
Al: "Big brother, why are you naked?"
Me: Blonde Cow (Shocked) (Flying hair) "Ed's naked?!??"
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YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Me: [FMA]- Edward Blush  "...Pfffff--" fma gif  ed "Oh HELL no." Edward Elric - Icon "My mind's exploding with reasons..."

Me: "You can kill me now." Edward Elric - Icon 

(So many Ed icons haha)
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:iconjasmine5ds:
Jasmine5Ds Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA *Freaking out* DID HE DO WHAT I THINK HE DID? x,D
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YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
That he was too sexy for his own clothes?


...Seems like it.
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Jazellia Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
*Roy knocks and enters my room to find me gleefully tacking Ed's coat to the wall*
Roy: Sis, why is Pipsqueak's coat on your wall???
Me: Big bro! *falls off a stool and turns away to hide a huge blush* NO REASON!!!! *runs out the window*
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KitKatKits Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2016  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IMAGINATION WHY
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:iconmad4hugs:
Mad4hugs Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2016
Armin Arlert (Scared) [V2] I can't un-see that!!
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:iconlixtrance:
lixtrance Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Why would you want to?
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:iconhetalialove10:
HetaliaLove10 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
IKR!! It just popped up into the back of my mind and.... Eww......
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:icongabim617:
Gabim617 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
GRAY STOP GIVING PEOPLE YOUR INFECTIOUS STRIPPING HABIT!!!!!!!!Facepalm Le gasp 
Dont strip play Gobbowl instead!
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:iconcreepotaku:
Creepotaku Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH*processing* 
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:iconqueen-berry-belle:
Queen-Berry-Belle Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2015  Student Artist
He watched Fairy Tail and also got a stripping habbit from Gray.
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:iconxxsnipergirlxx1:
xXsnipergirlXx1 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2015  Student Artist
That end is weird •Π•
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:iconbestattackontitanfan:
Grey, how could you: you infected him with YOUR problem! .......Thank you so much.....
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:iconcoldness-cola:
Coldness-Cola Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2015  Student General Artist
OH MY GOD XD!!!! LOVE THIS REFERENCE!
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:iconmikasamlp531:
mikasamlp531 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Trying not to have a nosebleed here.
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:icontoxieon:
Toxieon Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
maybe he just sleeps naked? *you can't tell, but I'm trying to contain my self here*
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:iconnightphoenix9:
NightPhoenix9 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
And at that moment, a thousand fangirls were hear screaming in the distance :o
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:iconhetalialove10:
HetaliaLove10 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2016
I heard fangirls and saw a naked ed . * shivers *
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:iconannikathenordstrom:
Annikathenordstrom Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMFG 
Oops! 
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:iconshaneen07:
shaneen07 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
(insert sausage joke here) Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2]  hahaha my my the things i thought 
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YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
yyyyup. My head's now an explosive.
*checks watch*

Gonna explode about half a second no--
boom


NOSEBLEED EVERYWHERE
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:iconpaigertlol:
paigertlol Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ed be like "I'm bringing sexy back." All of the sudden everyone else is singing and yaaaa.
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YoshiSHITJUSTGOTREAL Featured By Owner May 24, 2016  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
... *.//is imagining*

*.//suddenly explodes seeing Ed naked--*
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bimlemis Featured By Owner Edited Jul 19, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
At the ending I was like "what the..." Then a few seconds past and I was like "ohhh oh-Noo u didn't Troll " and then I got REALLY dirty mind TellMeMoreEyesplz Big Fool Emoji-05 (Pervy Nosebleed) [V2] 
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UmbreonPlanet Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015
Gray's stripping habit has now infected Edward! Praise the gods for that! XD
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:iconnightphoenix9:
NightPhoenix9 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Fangirls: *Cheering wildly* :D
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paigertlol Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Oh no. I watched an episode of Hetalia, and Italys like "let's all get naked!" THE GRAY APOCALYPSE IS COMING!!!! HIDE YOU KIDS!! HIDE YOUR WIVES!!! 
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Fanfictions112 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
XD :iconcannotevenplz: too flabbergasted by awesomeness of comment.
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AleXMokOro Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Dat ending doe even though we know you did somthing
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InSaNe-DrAwInGs Featured By Owner May 15, 2015  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XDDDD HAHAHAHHA
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ilovekid-kun Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Student Filmographer
Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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Lucijohn Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Lol chain letters
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:iconilovekid-kun:
ilovekid-kun Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2015  Student Filmographer
IKR
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Italylover6 Featured By Owner Edited Apr 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Al why'd you have to look at him. And Ed put some clothes on and LET ME LEARN ALCHEMY! Btws you should totally continue this.:D
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theotakugurl Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Student General Artist
O.O What has Ed done to me?!
But I really liked this!
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:iconhyebi606:
hyebi606 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
im scared..... i dont wanna be in a teen pregnancy tv showhappy cry XD  
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Silverblood8 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
Nah alchemizing condoms is part of the training
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:iconhyebi606:
hyebi606 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2015
ed did say that titans sound like a brand for big condoms XD
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Sugar-Crazed-Fangirl Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Dat ending... LOVE IT XD Swag-trap the pimp-daddy 
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FlutterDash134 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2015  Student Writer
DAT ENDING THOUGHBonnie Bruh Chat Icon 
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:iconhomestucklov35:
homestucklov35 Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
WTF !!!
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:iconshy-little-wolf-pup:
Shy-Little-Wolf-Pup Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
BOOM PREGNANT!
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CitrusOtakuTea Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
lolz that ending
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Nikkirubinstein Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2014  Student Writer

Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Artist
the ending.........what did he to to us?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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:iconvamp104:
Vamp104 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Lol dat ending!
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LoZFangirl1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Bahaha! Love the ending
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ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol dat ending thou
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