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"Shorty!"

"Who are you calling too short to see with a magnifying glass?!"

"Brother, please. She didn't say that, did you ________?"

"Of course I did, this shorty need to learn to stay out of my buisness!"

"What?! Stay out of your buisness? You were trying to learn alchemy, and I wanted to help."

"Well don't, I don't need some migit to help me with something I can do myself!"

"DON"T CALL ME SHORT!"

"I can do whatever I want."

"You can't learn alchemy by yourself."

"Why not? You did."

"That's different!"

"How?"

"It just is!"

"Fine shorty! Just leave me alone!" You begin to stomp away angrily while Ed and Al look too shocked to say anything.

---Later that Night---

You sneak out of you room to go appologize to Ed when you hear Al say something. 'Why is Al in Ed's room,' you thought while listening in on their conversation.

"Brother, why did you have to be so mean to ________?"

"Because I don't want her learning alchemy."

"Why?"

"I know she wants to come with me but I don't want her turning into another military 'dog'. I care about her too much."

You gasp loudly and they both turn towards the door.

"Brother, what was that?"

"I'll go check."

You stand rooted to the spot as Ed opens the door.

"_______? What are you doing here?" Ed starts to blush when he remembers what he just said.

"Do you really care about me?"

"I... um I..."

You grab Ed and begin to drag him towards your room. When you arrive you sit on your bed and pat the spot next to you, trying to get him to sit down. He sits down and starts blushing even more.

"Do you really care about me?"

"Um... I..." Suddenly he leans over and kisses you. When he breaks the kiss he mumbles, "Yes."

You smile, "I love you too Ed."

---The Next Morning---

Ed gets up and starts to wander down the hall to the kitchen half asleep and sees Al reading a book about alchemy. He looks up only to see Ed naked.

"Brother, why are you naked?"

Ed looks down at himself them suddenly screams, "I didn't do anything, I swear!"
I decided it was about time to put this up of deviantart. It's been in my notebook for a while now. It was originally a really strong lemon and my friend wrote the lemon part, but I decided I liked this version beter.

Trying to decide if I should continue this or not.

I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist, Ed, or Al.
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Nikkirubinstein Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Student Writer

Sorry I had to do this ;-;

Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever?
Boy: No
Girl: Do u even like me?
Boy: No
Girl: Would u cry if i walked away?
Boy: No
She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes
The boy grabbed her arm
Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful
Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever
Boy: I dont like u...I love u
Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away.
Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me
Girl: I will...
*Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u
*Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm
*Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!!
*Get ready for the shock of your life!
*If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 years
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FullmetalPain Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014  Student Artist
the ending.........what did he to to us?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Vamp104 Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol dat ending!
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LoZFangirl1 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014
Bahaha! Love the ending
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ShadowGamer1315 Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol dat ending thou
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ALEXANDRA-DARK Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
MOWR PLZZZZ!!!!!! LIFE DEPENDS ON IT!!!!!
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ALEXANDRA-DARK Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014
btw awesome
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FullmetalAndCatLover Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol al should have been more like:

"B-B-BROTHER!? IS THERE ANY PARTICULAR REASON WHY YOU ARE NOT WEARING ANY CLOTHING...?!"

Lolol well anyway, u did really good at the story! I laughed at the part when Ed came doenstairs naked:)))) classic:)
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Envylover565 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Awwww I want to read the Lemon
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ThorxMexThor Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
IYLKFVBULM<I?!?! MOUR!
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