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"Shorty!"

"Who are you calling too short to see with a magnifying glass?!"

"Brother, please. She didn't say that, did you ________?"

"Of course I did, this shorty need to learn to stay out of my buisness!"

"What?! Stay out of your buisness? You were trying to learn alchemy, and I wanted to help."

"Well don't, I don't need some migit to help me with something I can do myself!"

"DON"T CALL ME SHORT!"

"I can do whatever I want."

"You can't learn alchemy by yourself."

"Why not? You did."

"That's different!"

"How?"

"It just is!"

"Fine shorty! Just leave me alone!" You begin to stomp away angrily while Ed and Al look too shocked to say anything.

---Later that Night---

You sneak out of you room to go appologize to Ed when you hear Al say something. 'Why is Al in Ed's room,' you thought while listening in on their conversation.

"Brother, why did you have to be so mean to ________?"

"Because I don't want her learning alchemy."

"Why?"

"I know she wants to come with me but I don't want her turning into another military 'dog'. I care about her too much."

You gasp loudly and they both turn towards the door.

"Brother, what was that?"

"I'll go check."

You stand rooted to the spot as Ed opens the door.

"_______? What are you doing here?" Ed starts to blush when he remembers what he just said.

"Do you really care about me?"

"I... um I..."

You grab Ed and begin to drag him towards your room. When you arrive you sit on your bed and pat the spot next to you, trying to get him to sit down. He sits down and starts blushing even more.

"Do you really care about me?"

"Um... I..." Suddenly he leans over and kisses you. When he breaks the kiss he mumbles, "Yes."

You smile, "I love you too Ed."

---The Next Morning---

Ed gets up and starts to wander down the hall to the kitchen half asleep and sees Al reading a book about alchemy. He looks up only to see Ed naked.

"Brother, why are you naked?"

Ed looks down at himself them suddenly screams, "I didn't do anything, I swear!"
I decided it was about time to put this up of deviantart. It's been in my notebook for a while now. It was originally a really strong lemon and my friend wrote the lemon part, but I decided I liked this version beter.

Trying to decide if I should continue this or not.

I do not own Fullmetal Alchemist, Ed, or Al.
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:iconthebunnyalchemist:
TheBunnyAlchemist Featured By Owner 4 hours ago  Hobbyist Writer
Lol al should have been more like:

"B-B-BROTHER!? IS THERE ANY PARTICULAR REASON WHY YOU ARE NOT WEARING ANY CLOTHING...?!"

Lolol well anyway, u did really good at the story! I laughed at the part when Ed came doenstairs naked:)))) classic:)
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Envylover565 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  New member
Awwww I want to read the Lemon
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ThorxMexThor Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IYLKFVBULM<I?!?! MOUR!
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Nepeta132 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014
Ed looks down at himself them suddenly screams, "I didn't do anything, I swear!" I walk downstairs only in Ed's T-shirt and falls on Ed. "Umm.... hehe... Umm... Yeah", Ed shuttered.

((Real convincing Ed real convincing))
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DuckyCupcakes Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me: walks out In only Ed's t-shirt

Ed: blushes

Al: :iconpervyalphonseplz:
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unitato4321 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  New member Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol lol lol lol lol
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:icongtwinner621:
GTWinner621 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014  Student Writer
Alsphone's line... Reminded me of Lichtenstein... :iconpervyamericaplz:
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:iconpraiselordzalgo:
praiselordzalgo Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So true! I'm imagining her just looking at Switzy and saying.That!
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:icongtwinner621:
GTWinner621 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Student Writer
To whom though?
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iloveallhetaliastuff Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
france obviously lol 
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